Showing posts with label persuasive writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label persuasive writing. Show all posts
Thursday, June 22, 2017
Monday, June 12, 2017
Animals In Zoos
Animals In Zoos
I personally believe that keeping animals in zoos is definitely extremely fierce and cruel. This is an action that we, humans do to harm those lovely animals. Zoos don’t keep animals and care for them well enough. Below are some reasons of why I think that keeping animals at zoos is cruel.
First, animals are also living things, they have feelings and emotions just like us humans do. When we visit zoos, most visitors would throw food to the animals and make them jump around to get the treats and some people might even trick them just to make themselves happy, but not the animal. Throwing food to the animals might fulfill what us humans want and cheers us up, but the animals also have feelings too, you are tiring the animals and they may feel sad once they know that you’re tricking them. Sometimes, when certain types of animals aren’t behaving well, zookeepers lock them into cages.
Second of all, we shouldn’t interfere with the animal’s original lifestyle. Before they were brought to the zoo's, animals used to live in a spacious, free and natural environment. However, some zoos catch them from the wild fiercely and forced them to go to the zoos! To do what? Entertain us humans! They have to leave all their friends and families in the wild just for others to be entertained. Would they feel happy? Why do they need to sacrifice? I’m sure it wouldn’t be nice! Another reason is that zoos put fake backgrounds and wallpapers to pretend that it’s the nature environment, so that animals would feel safer, but it just does the opposite.
Thirdly animals are living things, they also have feelings and emotions, so they have their own rights. Some basic rights that all animals should deserve are being able to live their own life, be protected by the laws and be ensured to be taken care safely and carefully at all times. Some countries and cities now have laws to protect the animals, I think there should be laws everywhere around the world for these precious animals.
Monday, May 8, 2017
Persuasive Writing
We learnt how to write a argument.
I believe children should be allowed to eat healthy snacks in class because food helps them to concentrate and it will cut down on unhealthy food eaten during breaks.
We Should Be Allowed To Eat During Class Time
I strongly believe that children should be allowed to eat healthy food during class time.
Firstly it is hard to concentrate on a empty stomach. Students are more likely to fidget and not listen and get off task if they are hungry.
Secondly hunger can make learning difficult. The brain needs energy to make it function properly. If you are hungry you will have memory and concentration problems.
Thirdly eating healthy food in class would cut down on the amount of junk food eaten at play times. This would cut out behaviour problems created by unhealthy food. It would also help to keep children healthier and maintain their ideal weight.
I believe children should be allowed to eat healthy snacks in class because food helps them to concentrate and it will cut down on unhealthy food eaten during breaks.
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